the writing is bad. it all starts with wuk lamat not knowing anything.
her never leaving tuliyollal? but then she crosses the ocean and travels to another continent to get help who barely does anything anyway?
she is full of energy and curiousity... why would someone like that stay in the city? her anxiety is clearly not big enough for that.
she is proud of tural, proud of the peace the different cultures have with each other. proud of her father who traveled tural... why wouldnt she learn anything... and then suddenly it becomes important when its about becoming queen? makes her look as if she never really cared about those people in that amazing country full of culture.
but there is more to that.
the father, proud king of tural, traveled the land to unify the people to bring peace to them and also learning their cultures.
he obviously sees that as very important. we can see that even more in how the trials are constructed. the cultures of the people are of utmost importance.
the head of wisdom was a wise and forseeing man.
and also a caring father? more or less?
but he only ever teaches his children about the cultures through those trials? where is his duty in teaching the next ruler?
a daughter who knows nothing at all, and two sons who reject culture completely / looking down on it? amazing education great and wise king and father gulool ja ja.
i guess i am now one of those people in the internet who thinks he can do it better than the learned professionals.
a better solution:
would it have been so bad if wuk lamat at least knows some things? like let her know about the hanuhanu, the pelupelu and the moblins.
this would make her look more competent / better prepared. as if she actually cares even before the trials.
i know she is used as the unkowing person so we, the player, get explainings to all that different stuff. but thete are like four other people in the group who have never went to tural, who know nothing... people who could also ask questions.
this would make wuk lamat look less stupid and less annoying. it would allow for mor variety and also give more presence to the other people (including the wol).... wuk would still be the main character.
she could even teach us a bit about those cultures and than she would be the question asker for he yok huy and the mammol ja.
what do you think? is my criticism appropriate or do you think it makes sense for her to not know anything / never learnd anything about 'her' country
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her never leaving tuliyollal? but then she crosses the ocean and travels to another continent to get help who barely does anything anyway?
she is full of energy and curiousity... why would someone like that stay in the city? her anxiety is clearly not big enough for that.
she is proud of tural, proud of the peace the different cultures have with each other. proud of her father who traveled tural... why wouldnt she learn anything... and then suddenly it becomes important when its about becoming queen? makes her look as if she never really cared about those people in that amazing country full of culture.
but there is more to that.
the father, proud king of tural, traveled the land to unify the people to bring peace to them and also learning their cultures.
he obviously sees that as very important. we can see that even more in how the trials are constructed. the cultures of the people are of utmost importance.
the head of wisdom was a wise and forseeing man.
and also a caring father? more or less?
but he only ever teaches his children about the cultures through those trials? where is his duty in teaching the next ruler?
a daughter who knows nothing at all, and two sons who reject culture completely / looking down on it? amazing education great and wise king and father gulool ja ja.
i guess i am now one of those people in the internet who thinks he can do it better than the learned professionals.
a better solution:
would it have been so bad if wuk lamat at least knows some things? like let her know about the hanuhanu, the pelupelu and the moblins.
this would make her look more competent / better prepared. as if she actually cares even before the trials.
i know she is used as the unkowing person so we, the player, get explainings to all that different stuff. but thete are like four other people in the group who have never went to tural, who know nothing... people who could also ask questions.
this would make wuk lamat look less stupid and less annoying. it would allow for mor variety and also give more presence to the other people (including the wol).... wuk would still be the main character.
she could even teach us a bit about those cultures and than she would be the question asker for he yok huy and the mammol ja.
what do you think? is my criticism appropriate or do you think it makes sense for her to not know anything / never learnd anything about 'her' country
Continue reading...